Travel report from Ukraine

I work on a travel report from Ukraine (and a stopover in Russia and
Belarus) and have made a trailer version that it would be interesting
to get your feedback on. Input in facts, if some parts works good or
bad, the use of secondary sources, themes that is missing, if you have
additional info or suggested sources for additional info on some of the

subjects and other feedback is apreciated.

The story can be downloaded on this
link:http://www.thorsnas.com/ukraine2006/ukraine2006.pdf - This is a
2,2MB PDF...

Thank you in advance,

Jan

wrote:
I work on a travel report from Ukraine (and a stopover in Russia and
Belarus) and have made a trailer version that it would be interesting
to get your feedback on. Input in facts, if some parts works good or
bad, the use of secondary sources, themes that is missing, if you have
additional info or suggested sources for additional info on some of the
subjects and other feedback is apreciated.

Your translation of the "angry students' demonstrating" banner is wrong
- the banner says "Yushchenko - rozcharuvannya natsiyi" which means
"nation's disappointment", not "you are a nazi".

igor

igor skrev:
wrote:
I work on a travel report from Ukraine (and a stopover in Russia and
Belarus) and have made a trailer version that it would be interesting
to get your feedback on. Input in facts, if some parts works good or
bad, the use of secondary sources, themes that is missing, if you have
additional info or suggested sources for additional info on some of the
subjects and other feedback is apreciated.

Your translation of the "angry students' demonstrating" banner is wrong
- the banner says "Yushchenko - rozcharuvannya natsiyi" which means
"nation's disappointment", not "you are a nazi".

Thanks Igor, that will be changed in the final edition.

Jan

schrieb:

I work on a travel report from Ukraine (and a stopover in Russia and
Belarus) and have made a trailer version that it would be interesting
to get your feedback on. Input in facts, if some parts works good or
bad,

Second, window cleaning is hardly a high priority on the Ukrainian rainlays.

??

An 18 years old guy from Ivano-Frankovsk in shorts and
no t-shirt is the restaurant-wagons resturant wagon.

??

We drink Ukrainian Polon beer [...]

Obolon beer?

the use of secondary sources, themes that is missing, if you have
additional info or suggested sources for additional info on some of the

subjects and other feedback is apreciated.

Quite a lot of spelling mistakes to correct just in case you want to
make up a long-term version of your trip report.

Regards, ULF

Ulf Kutzner skrev:
schrieb:

I work on a travel report from Ukraine (and a stopover in Russia and
Belarus) and have made a trailer version that it would be interesting
to get your feedback on. Input in facts, if some parts works good or
bad,


Quite a lot of spelling mistakes to correct just in case you want to
make up a long-term version of your trip report.

Thank you for playing Ulf, though I would not spend to much energy on
spelling and fonts right now, as whole paragraphs still can be deleted
or totally rewritten. It is not a coincidence that I ask for comments
don't ask for comments on spelling (or layout for that matter).


Jan

I work on a travel report from Ukraine (and a stopover in Russia and
Belarus) and have made a trailer version that it would be interesting
to get your feedback on. Input in facts, if some parts works good or
bad, the use of secondary sources, themes that is missing, if you have
additional info or suggested sources for additional info on some of the
subjects and other feedback is apreciated.

The story can be downloaded on this
link:http://www.thorsnas.com/ukraine2006/ukraine2006.pdf - This is a
2,2MB PDF...

That was brilliant.

I don't think you gave an exact reference fo Ascherson's book - it's
"Black Sea".

"Unmongolical"? - note sure what on earth you're saying here.

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I work on a travel report from Ukraine (and a stopover in Russia and
Belarus) and have made a trailer version that it would be interesting
to get your feedback on. Input in facts, if some parts works good or
bad, the use of secondary sources, themes that is missing, if you have
additional info or suggested sources for additional info on some of the
subjects and other feedback is apreciated.

The story can be downloaded on this
link:http://www.thorsnas.com/ukraine2006/ukraine2006.pdf - This is a
2,2MB PDF...

That was brilliant.

I don't think you gave an exact reference fo Ascherson's book - it's
"Black Sea".

"Unmongolical"? - note sure what on earth you're saying here.

that is an error - the right word is Unmongolian

Jan

============== j-c ====== @ ====== purr . demon . co . uk ==============
Jack Campin: 11 Third St, Newtongrange EH22 4PU, Scotland | tel 0131 660 4760
http://www.purr.demon.co.uk/jack/ for CD-ROMs and free | fax 0870 0554 975
stuff: Scottish music, food intolerance, & Mac logic fonts | mob 07800 739 557

skrev:
I work on a travel report from Ukraine (and a stopover in Russia and
Belarus) and have made a trailer version that it would be interesting
to get your feedback on. Input in facts, if some parts works good or
bad, the use of secondary sources, themes that is missing, if you have
additional info or suggested sources for additional info on some of the

subjects and other feedback is apreciated.

The story can be downloaded on this
link:http://www.thorsnas.com/ukraine2006/ukraine2006.pdf - This is a
2,2MB PDF...

Thank you in advance,

I have now done some updates. The errors that you poited out is
corrected and a new, and interesting, part is added on the end.

Thank you for your help so far and don't hessitate to give further
comments or suggestions,

Jan